First draft for trailer

This is the first draft for our psychological thriller trailer:

We were aware before uploading this that we still need to work on the background music, add credits and other inter-titles, and that the start is too slow, and needs changing. The feedback we received from this told us that, as gave us some advice such as to not use the news report right at the start of the trailer, and to make the entire trailer non chronological, as opposed to what we currently had, where only the montage was non chronological. We were also told to include sound effects which we had forgotten about. We were also told to remove the scream from the end and replace it with another shot that we had filmed and not thought we could use.